Review Thread

Another sucsess Ahsoka, btw when are you going to start the next fan fic?

I will start the next one when this one is done. they are a series

so, this is the first and the second one will continue right off of this. if that is what you mean.

Right then it will be secrets of a broken heart and then young love by then I will probably have atleast 2 more ideas so the series will be pretty long
Please leave suggestion and tell me when the story is getting boring so I can wrap it up and move on to the next one! And don't be afraid to ask questions like jacen did. They could even be parts of the story your confused about


THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING MY FANFIC

Will do Ahsoka.

so when are you posting the next chapter?

Good chapter Ahsoka!

The next chapter will probably be posted 2day but if not defiantly by wednessday night cause I don't have swimming practice sry it's taking a while this chapter means A LOT to me cause basically it is a huge talk between anakin and ahsoka so kind of sets up their relationship for the rest of the story. This chapter also it the introduction to the main story line!!!! So be prepared . If I get this up by today then chapter 11 will be posted on wednessday

Ok I just really want to thank you guys for being so enthusiastic about my story.... Whether u actully like it that much of not. In your reply please tell me how I'm doing with portraying anakin and ahsoka as well as the other characters. Point out things u like or don't like in the chapters and feel free to ask how to pronounce characters names I would be more than happy to post that(those will appear on the first page of the review thread)

In that case, I think you portray Anakin in a way that I like better than TCW Anakin.

AWWWWWW THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH THAT MEANS MORE TO ME THAN YOU KNOW!!!!!
Also is their any characters you guys would rather see more of, or story plot ideas.
REALLY I AM OPEN TO ANY SUGGESTIONs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How did you pronounce Ahsoka's friends name? Raise?

Ra (as in rasberry) and see, ra-ee, Rasi
Her mother Gini is pronounced genie like genie in a bottle
Ahsoka's grandmother is Vina Tano v-E-na vi as in venus and na, ve-na, Vina

Alright, and the what the bell thing in the story, was that just the altrenative for the real word?

Ha, nice quote-"I don't want to head further down the spooky cave...."! Funny! Anyway, the only person I'd request seeing is Kenobi. But if that's a problem, don't try it. Anyways, good chapter!

I would like to see Padme, but i think that it would be hard for you to get her to shili, so I can wait for the next book.

sry it was suppose to be bell not bell i will fix that

Ya, I think I know aht you meant, HA has something that will change curse words into words that sound like it.

yeah, me too, By the way, would it kill you to not have a cliff hanger? jkjkjkjkjkjkjkjk, loved the chapter, can't wait for Anakin to have Ahsoka to talk to to compare about there moms deaths.

hmmmm you might be surprised about what actually happens in the next chapter

really?

i have a trick or two up my sleve