Posts : 4965 Join date : 2010-07-06 Location : With Chewbacca
Nothing really. It's really good. Though I did think that Padme and Obi-Wan were more brother and sister then father and daughter. I really don't see anything else wrong.
Posts : 4965 Join date : 2010-07-06 Location : With Chewbacca
Oh boy Padme! You have THREE blogs now! (I'm a sucker for good blogs) LOL Oh, I also hope your NaNoWriMo story is going well. It's called My Sister, right?