Review Thread

yeh!Ill add more to this ch.1 an dnow my book will make sense!

thx!

Love chapter five Belle! I can't wait for chapter six!

thanks!!!!!but itll b a few weeks

BelleMarieena wrote:thanks!!!!!but itll b a few weeks

A few weeks!? Well, I can just read chapter five over again because it was so good!

thanks!I like to write my storys in real timing, Belle will heal in a few weeks, but she still wont be strong enough for the battle feild. But the next part has tons of action. And youll see a new character, a three an a half year old youngling named Isis(so cute!)
But youll also see Graciana again but this time with a partner,AURRA SING!
How yall like them apples!

YAY!!!! AURRA SING! Poor Belle! I feel so sorry for her. And what about the fatal five? My favorite is Breiane.

You wont see them but theres this one part that has,wait,NO SPOILERS!!!oh but did i mention belle falls in love???

Awwwwwww! Belle falls in love!

And secretly gets married
has a baby girl, but has to give it to her other close friend but she sees her every chance she can
then dies;( but she dies saving the republic along side her secret love
And she still visted her daughter everyday of her life even after she died
BUt IM IN THE PROCESS OF WRITING 2 SEQUALS THAT HAS BELLES DAUGHTER IN IT!!!!!!!!ROSALINA ALEXXIS MARIEENA!!!!!!!!!!!SO the whole thing will be a trilogy!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, when you told me Belle dies I started crying! I am not joking! Tears are starting to come down my face! I want Belle! SHE'S TOO AWESOME TO DIE! LOL I like that name Rosalina. It's so pretty. And what's Belle's husband's name?

Kayden(couldnt think of anything else an it sounds good!)
But ou would love how she dies!So sweet!but sad!Padme and anakin cry!Her baby!Her best friend!Oh but she dies in the arms of the man she loves and he dies with her!

Belles death sounds so sad! Kayden dies too? Aww.... Well, I hope he is in most of the chapters! He sounds cool already! Is Kayden a Jedi? and will there baby be a jedi?

Jedi
Rosalina is force sensative why she had to be hidden.She becomes a general in the rebel alliance.Shes awesome jsut like her mama!!!!!Shes also close friends with Leia like their moms were!Her and luke hate eachother tho(not rly they juast act like it) Rosalina gets married and all has kids and the end!Sad thing tho is she knows everthing about how the empire started but she never told.AN SHE CALLED ANAKIN UNCLE ANI!!!!!!!;(
When she was a baby!!!!!!!!!sad!!!!!!!!!!And She called Padme Aunt Mei Mei!

Yay! Leia will be in the story! BTW I am going now! Bye!

bye!

Well until i post my next chapters you can discuss my chapters, and all stuff in my book that ive posted so far. And MAYBE ill tell a few spoilers

ok until i post my storys again u can talk about my book an all on here!

Is that good r bad???

It means nothing. he was just putting up the review thread.

ohhhhh

Great story Belle!!!

Hey Barriss,maybe you should also post that review on the story thread as well. Us admin may erase this thread soon.