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76Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:48 am

GeneralGrievous505

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None taken, and I understand that you like the what if stories. I myself haven't been that into them, yet it is neat the way you guys do them and I would never begrudge them. Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink

77Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:57 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Exclamation Re-read chapter one! I made some little changes! Exclamation



Last edited by Leia Organa on Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:46 am; edited 2 times in total

78Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:44 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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I've written chapter two! I just need to clean it up or whatever then I'll post it. It's longer then chapter one. I thought I would get some action going in this chapter, but as it turned out it's setting up some action that will should place in chapter three.

79Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:35 am

Guest


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can't wait till you post more of your story leia.

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80Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:52 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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by DarthCadues781 Today at 6:35 pm

.can't wait till you post more of your story leia.

Thank you, Jacen. I should have it up soon. Very Happy

81Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:48 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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Yeah, can't wait! Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin

82Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:08 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Thanks Greivous. It might be up later today. I actually need to finish re-writing it. I am going to be changing my first chapter just a bit again I believe so it will match up with the second chapter since I've decided to do a couple different things.

83Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:08 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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I see.

84Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:12 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Okay, I changed it a bit.

85Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Sep 07, 2010 3:15 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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Cool!

86Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:46 am

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

Great story so far!!! Review Thread - Page 4 Alien Review Thread - Page 4 Alien

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87Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Sep 08, 2010 4:52 am

Guest


Guest

yeah, it really is, Smile

88Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:38 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Thanks everyone! I have been typing the story on my computer today, but I won't have time to post it. It's been a really busy day for me. It's also longer then the other chapters.

89Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:57 am

Guest


Guest

take your time, the more anticipation there is the better it'll be

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90Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:18 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Well then. I just hope you guys aren't let down by the chapter. I think it's pretty good though. I might have it up today, but It'll probably be put up tomarow.

91Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:08 pm

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Okay! I updated! Please read and review!

92Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:43 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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ok, I'll read it soon. Unfortunately I've yet to have an awful lot of time on my hands, but I'll read it as soon as I get the chance! Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink

93Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:31 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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by GeneralGrievous505 Today at 5:43 pm

.ok, I'll read it soon. Unfortunately I've yet to have an awful lot of time on my hands, but I'll read it as soon as I get the chance!

Okay, Greivous. Everyone else please read! Very Happy

94Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:43 am

Guest


Guest

That was great, I am looking foward to Ahsoka finding out that Padme was alive all along.

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95Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Fri Sep 10, 2010 11:46 pm

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Yeah, don't forget that it will probably be a big shock to Padme and Obi-Wan too that Leia had even lived. Anyway, thanks for the comment. Very Happy

96Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:20 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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Ok, just read Chap. 2. I thought it was pretty good Leia. I really liked the description of Ahsoka and how she was found and stuff. Definitely a story worthy of praise Leia. I give it 5 stars: Review Thread - Page 4 Star3 Review Thread - Page 4 Star3 Review Thread - Page 4 Star3 Review Thread - Page 4 Star3 Review Thread - Page 4 Star3 Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin

97Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:10 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Wow. Thank you, Greivous. Very Happy

98Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sat Sep 11, 2010 7:59 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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No problem. I thought you deserved it for the obvious hard work you put in to the story. Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_wink

99Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:26 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Thanks. It just all came to me one day. Very Happy

100Review Thread - Page 4 Empty Re: Review Thread Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:33 am

GeneralGrievous505

GeneralGrievous505
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Same thing with my story!!! Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin Review Thread - Page 4 Icon_biggrin

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