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Cool! Also very creepy! I feel sorry for the poor guy! Nice work!

Awesome!a little creepy but AWESOME

The fact that it's kind of creepy makes it really cool.

Whoa. Very good story!

Wow. Very good story indeed.

All of the characters listed in this story are real. Susejo was indeed some creepy person who somehow had been "connected" to the Sarlacc and did indeed love to tease and torture the Sarlacc's victims. Kithaba was indeed a skiff guard who worked for Jabba. He was indeed knocked off the skiff and pulled into the Sarlacc by its tongue. The insults Boba Fett used against Susejo and the way he escaped are from the short story "A Barve Like That: The Tale of Boba Fett" from "Tales from Jabba's palace".

If you are confused as to why the tentacles opened when Kithaba and Boba Fett insulted Susejo, I will explain what happens. Angering Susejo angers the Sarlacc. When Susejo gets angry, and therefore the Sarlacc, the Sarlacc will open the tentacles grabbing the person who angered them and try to slap them. It is confusing, but I hope I made it make at least a little more sense.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Susejo
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kithaba

Great story Evanthetoon!

I think that you should probably write another one. Your a really good writer.

I agree if you have time you should definately write another.

I'm thinking of writing a story about a Jedi who gets killed during Order 66. I need to think of a really cool ending though, like this story (the last sentence almost says more than the entire rest of the story).

That sounds like a good idea. BTW, have you read my story so far? Right now I'm trying to get a bunch of reviews to both improve my current story and maybe write a new one.

I think it would be interesting to hear about Order 66 from the perspective of a Jedi that perished when the Order was issued.

That's what I had planned. First-person stories that end with the person getting killed are slightly creepy.

They are, but they are also interesting.

I agree completely. Creepy stories are always interesting.

As long as they're not too creepy. Your first story was very creative. I hope your second is just as good!

I can't seem to think of anything interesting for my new story. But I am working on it.

I am confused about the first part.

A slight bit of creepiness is usually good.

That's the point: it is supossed to be confusing. Obviously someone who just fell into a Sarlacc would be a little disoriented.

But yes, Kithaba is confused and he is trying to sort out the events leading up to that moment.

"Jabba's Palace, Bounty Hunter, where am I?, etc." are all just thoughts in Kithaba's head.

Wow!!! Great chapter Evan!!!

Cool!!!

Ha!!! I liked the end where Boba still has some of Selestrine's hair.

Ooo, nice and creepy. What era is this story in? The Empire era?