Review Thread

Feel free to tell me your thoughts, as long as they're clean and polite. If you don't like the story, then don't review. It's that simple. Thanks y'all!!!!

I liked the story a lot, it's been a while since I've gotten to read a new fan-fic on here.

ww jedi chik, amazing story, with great detail and use of words. I cant wait for you to post more,

Lucas, then quit reviewing.

Grievous, Thank you SOOO much!!!!!!! I'd love to put up more. Probably tomorrow. This is the edited version btw. I wrote this story for NaNoWriMo last year, and I've recently re-did the WHOOOOOOLLLEEEE thing.

Jacen, thank you so much! I will definitely be posting more!!!!!

Great story, Jedi~Chick!!

Thanks a bunch Winter!!!! *hugs*

Just finished reading chapter two and i have to say its very well written. I see your taking your view of the clones from TCW and not so much from the books. I dont know if your just copying and pasting this or writing it along as you go, but if you need/ want some more info on the Clones life let me know. Cause the tv series is nothing like it would have actually been.

Cant wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

Thank you very much JangoNova!!!!
I have yet to read the books about the Clones. The only thing I know them from is TCW series, though I want to learn more. I know a few people now who are more 'educated' in the Clones than I am, so I'll let you know if I ever need anything. And I am just copy/pasting this, since it's already written/finished. XD

Thank you very much! I'll post the next chapter sometime soon.

Jedi~Chick wrote:Lucas, then quit reviewing.

Grievous, Thank you SOOO much!!!!!!! I'd love to put up more. Probably tomorrow. This is the edited version btw. I wrote this story for NaNoWriMo last year, and I've recently re-did the WHOOOOOOLLLEEEE thing.

Jacen, thank you so much! I will definitely be posting more!!!!!

Ha, I'm actually doing the exact same thing with my fan-fic, but it's taking forever to redo it. Oh, and like Jango Nova, I know a lot about the clones iof you ever need help from either of us.

Thanks Grievous! I'll let y'all know!!! I'm writing a sequel, and I might need some help. XD
Good luck with your fanfic! I know how hard it is. I've rewritten a LOT of this story. I'm rewriting the ending now. XD

Yeah, I'm still stuck in writing a new setting and background storyline for mine.

Trust me, I know all about how hard it is to write (or rewrite, in my case) the storyline. XD I made a MAJOR change at the end of the book, and it's going to tie into the sequel. But it's VERY hard for me to rewrite it, because I pretty much had to start from scratch.
If you ever need help, feel free to let me know! I don't know what I could do, but I am an editor/proof reader in training. xDD I beta read for a lot of people on Fanfiction.net.

Wow, sounds very cool, if and when I get my rewritten section done, I'll be sure to show it to you.

Awesome! can't wait!!! Thanks Grievous! Good luck!

Yeah, I'm gonna need it. LOL.

Ahh!!! LOL!! xDDD

Good addition to the story, very well written. One thing you MAY want to change though (depending on how close to SW canon you want this to be and considering we only saw her through comlink anyway) is Shaak Ti's location. She was actually in the Jedi Temple during Order 66 but she managed to escape to (as you noted) Felucia where she ran into Maris Brood along the way. Just some food for thought, but I'm not complaining, it was written very well.

Thank you!
Yes, I know about Shaak Ti's escape from the Temple. I read all about that on Wookieepedia....AFTER writing this. XDD Shaak Ti had a few padawans, but none of them lived, which automatically makes this non-canon.
This story is /partially/ canon, because it can and can't work with the canon story. It's complicated to explain, but in my crazy mind it makes sense. XDDD Thank you very much Grievous! I appreciate the feedback!

Oh, ok then, LOL, I wasn't exactly sure how close to the SW canon you wanted so I thought I would let you know. I guess I'll never figure out how close to the canon you want to be though now, LOL

LOL! Thanks for mentioning it though, that was nice. If I ever go back and rewrite again (which is unlikely seeing how long it took the first and second times around) I'll probably make it MORE canon if possible. XD
Haha, nope. LOL!!

Ha, LOL, it's hard to make up your mind!

LOL!! Yes. I am a girl. I do not make up my mind easily. XDDDD LOL, jk.

Heh, it has nothing to do with being a girl. I take forever to make decisions. But I also play KOTOR too much, lol jk.

Just finished the latest chapter. Good job If you like romances and want to learn more about the Clones, Check out the Republic Commando series by Karen Traviss. They are a great read!

Oh, I have that series. Yeah, they're pretty good, i just wish they would've focused more on the missions instead of them deserting the war. It kinda takes the commando part of it completely out, any clone could've just deserted.