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I also hope that they make more stories featuring Rahm Kota (that's another reason I made up this story)

Yeah, Grievous is a great character, and I wish there would be more stories about him.

Whew. Just finished chapter one if you want to read it . I'll probably post the bio of Admiral Cristov Valliant tomorrow.

Lots of action!

Ok. I've just posted the bio of Admiral Cristov valliant on the bio thread as well if you want to read it.

I concur plenty of action!!

Thanks, but you haven't seen a ANYTHING yet.

Usually when someone says that it means the story is going to get really, really, exciting. Yay!

You are correct. This story is just getting started! Here are a few spoilers: There is an epic battle between General Kota and Grievous. I don't want to say who wins or anything, but General Kota DOES board Grievous's ship and starts a big battle in its hangar(and yes there will be a lightsaber duel between Grievous and Kota)those are the only spoilers I'll give though.

That's the basic idea I'm having for Part 1. What do ya think of it? BTW, I'm hoping to post the first section of chapter two soon as well. It's going to be a space battle, so do you want me to keep the description of the space battles about the same like the one between Cristov Valliant and Grievous or what?

Just posted the first part of chapter 2 in case you couldn't tell.

"Uh, what are we supposed to do again?" a rather brave droid asked.

Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens with Kota and Grievous!!

GeneralGrievous505 wrote:Here are a few spoilers: There is an epic battle between General Kota and Grievous. I don't want to say who wins or anything, but General Kota DOES board Grievous's ship and starts a big battle in its hangar(and yes there will be a lightsaber duel between Grievous and Kota)those are the only spoilers I'll give though.

i know I already posted this, but I don't know if you saw them and since your so interested to see what happens, i'll post these spoilers again for ya.

BTW, if anybody else would like to give me reviews, feel free to do so!

Thanks! And yes if your a Kota fan like me, you'll be interested in the way I'm going to end this battle, and more to come.

Hey, I just updated what I've written of Chapter 2 if ya want to take a quick look.

Cool!

It's only a couple extra paragraphs, but i thought I might as well give what I've written just a little more detail.

Het grievos, I like the new peice in there, it is just so real and I could actually picture the events in my mind

Thanks. I've been trying to be as detailed as possible so that everyone has the same pictures in their heads

ok, just finished chapter 2 if you want to read it. This one really sets you up for chapter three, and trust me, I think you'll enjoy that chapter (P.S. it has a lot of action in it!)

WOW, that was amazing, you are a great writer.