Review Thread

sweet look foward to it.

Ok, posted about the first half-or-so of chapter 7 of Assault of the Aggressor. This part introduces one of my fav SW characters, Captain Talbot, and General Kota's astromech (I made the droid up though). Please tell me what you think, and most importantly, enjoy!

GREAT chapter grievous,

Thanks, though I'm not finished with it yet. I may even revise the part I have..... I'm such a perfectionist.

I bet

neither can I

Grevious that was amazing, I especially liked your description of general grevious, the battle sequences and the cammandos, honestly great story line and im looking foward to the next part

when are you goin to post the next part General?

SWneedsSASR wrote:Grevious that was amazing, I especially liked your description of general grevious, the battle sequences and the cammandos, honestly great story line and im looking foward to the next part

Thanks you very much, that means a lot!

JacenSolo781 wrote:when are you goin to post the next part General?

Yeah, I've been slacking, I'll try to write more today after I finish catching up on messages.

Okedokey, since you reminded me Jacen, I posted the rest of chapter 7. Tell me what you think of Grievous's escape!

WOW :shocked: Grievous, the detail made me feel like I was actually there, it was intense and AMAZING!!!

so, when are you posting the next ch.?

Thanks for the reviews! I was hoping to make the last seconds of Grievous's escape one of the best, and it appears I did so! Oh, and chapter 8/the last part one chapter will probably sometime this week. It's rather short, so it shoudn't take long.

Alright, look forward to reading it.

Ok, chapter eight and the end of part one has been posted in Assault of the Aggressor. There won't be much action within these next few chapters, mainly dialogue, but trust me, we'll be seeing some action later on.

Yeah, like I said, a lot of the upcoming chapters will be like that.

Ok for you loyal fans, I've redone Kratis Yurkal, to Onara Kuat. It turns out Onara was the real head of KDY during this time, so I decided to stick with SW canon.

Ok, chapter 9 of my story is close to being up!

Okeday, chapter 9 is up! I also posted a picture for it since it was the first chapter of part 2. I think you'll like it-it has a duel between Grievous and Dooku! BTW, I'd really like some reviews on this one, because I only got one review for chapter eight.

Really!? Thanks, I've been hoping to though I'm also trying not to overdo it and get my readers lost. Thanks a bunch!