Review Thread

Aw, the drummer's role was supposed to be mine.

A prologue? Sweet!

Yeah, I'm trying to make this seem as much like an official novel as possible.

well, I know some good publishers (maul passed through a phase where he wrote a book and sent it to publishers) if you need a list, majority will want the finished product and a go ahead from Lucas.

Yoda wrote:Cool Idea. Infact you should just right a novel.!!! I would love it!.

That's actually what this story's supposed to be. So far, what you've read has only been the first part of the larger story.

Mara-Jade781 wrote:well, I know some good publishers (maul passed through a phase where he wrote a book and sent it to publishers) if you need a list, majority will want the finished product and a go ahead from Lucas.

I'll take you up on that offer one day, thank you Mara. I'll want to finish the story first though. But, I'll come straight to you once it is.

Okedokey, I just posted the second half of chapter 6. Please give me a review, I'd like to know if it was suspenseful enough.

AWESOME!

Great chapter grievous.

Thanks y'all! This chapter I tried to focus on suspense. Did I do all right in that category?

definetly, either that or I am very impatient.

I'd say a little bit of both.

ha! you are probably right

Thanks, though I might revise it (and other parts) soon. IDK, I'm just wanting to perfect it for some reason.

Ok, I redid the last section of Chapter six. If you want me to post it, just let me know, but for right now I won't unless you want me to. It's nothing major, just a few sentences here and there, or minus a few bad ones.

yeah, go ahead and post it,

Okedokey, the "new and improved last section of chapter six" has been posted. Please tell me if it's better or worse this time around!

i think it was better, really great work greivous.

Thanks! I'll be posting chapter 7 soon, just for yalls info.

great.

Thanks, chapter 7 is basically the end of the battle. Then chapter 8 is basically wrapping other things up, then we begin Part 2: The Bounty Hunter.

which bounty hunters will be in it? supposing the title means what will be in it.

Actually, only one bounty hunter will be in it-Cad Bane. I just couldn't resist putting him in my story. In fact, his part is rather vital in it too, so he's not like Bossk was in the Bobe Fett arc, with almost nothing to do except say a good line here or there. He's gonna get some action!