Review Thread

Please discuss all of Jango Nova's fan-fics here, NOT on his story threads.

Got the first chapter up. Im in the process now of reading up to chapter 4 ( i already have them written but its been a while :p ) So ill get those up soon

Wow, great beginning-it had a lot of suspense, action, and backstory.

General Grievous wrote:Wow, great beginning-it had a lot of suspense, action, and backstory.

Thank You

Wow, I liked this chapter a lot too. It had that dark moment when Jango semi-randomly killed that Weequay, and you seem to know your Mando'a quite well.....

Vore' ner'vod Im sort of a Mando geek lol And the Weequay was sort of a random kill. I was going off of KOTOR where they had guards on certain bars in the Lower city and you had to pay to access them. So i brought that them to Coruscant for dramatic flair lol. Also shows that Jango will do almost anything to get this certain Jedi

Ooo! You're a KOTOR fan too! I LOVE that game, and it's sequel! Anyway, I see what you mean though about both being the mando geek and the Weequay's demise....

Good chapter and action, though it definitely messed with the Universe considering Magnaguards weren't around at this time and orange lightsabers were too rare for most Jedi to have...

Just because you dont see them around doesn't mean they arnt there Pirates after the vong war are still using Droidikas. That and i just like the Magnaguards lol. As for the orange Lightsaber i was going for rare as well. Jango still uses a lot of Clone Wars tech cause i have his father as an ARC Trooper who deserted after order 66.

Edit: Oh just found this on WookiePedia on the MagnaGuard section

Post-Clone Wars
Following the massacre of the Separatist Council by Darth Vader, under Darth Sidious's orders, all IG-100 MagnaGuards were deactivated. However, the Geonosian Gizor Dellso would later use IG-100 MagnaGuards as infantry in his personal army.[2] At least a decade later, two MagnaGuards were reactivated by the Galactic Empire for use as N-K Necrosis's bodyguards, and redesignated as NK-3s.[3] The bureaucrat Narp Pilyev owned two MagnaGuards and used them as security guards, to protect his apartment on Coruscant.[19] Aside from these examples, other persons of note occasionally employed them as guards and henchmen

Jango would probably fall into the last part there

Jango Nova wrote:Just because you dont see them around doesn't mean they arnt there Pirates after the vong war are still using Droidikas. That and i just like the Magnaguards lol. As for the orange Lightsaber i was going for rare as well. Jango still uses a lot of Clone Wars tech cause i have his father as an ARC Trooper who deserted after order 66.

Edit: Oh just found this on WookiePedia on the MagnaGuard section

Post-Clone Wars
Following the massacre of the Separatist Council by Darth Vader, under Darth Sidious's orders, all IG-100 MagnaGuards were deactivated. However, the Geonosian Gizor Dellso would later use IG-100 MagnaGuards as infantry in his personal army.[2] At least a decade later, two MagnaGuards were reactivated by the Galactic Empire for use as N-K Necrosis's bodyguards, and redesignated as NK-3s.[3] The bureaucrat Narp Pilyev owned two MagnaGuards and used them as security guards, to protect his apartment on Coruscant.[19] Aside from these examples, other persons of note occasionally employed them as guards and henchmen

Jango would probably fall into the last part there

Wait a second, maybe I'm getting confused here-is this story before or AFTER the Clone Wars, like a "what would've happened had Jango's head not flown off of his body" type story?

No. This around 16 aby. so its during the time where the Moffs are warring against each other and the New Republic. Sorry if i confused you lol

Oh, I get now, and this person isn't Jango Fett, but a NEW character who's first name's Jango right?

Yes, Jango Nova Part of his backstory

Oh, tehe, THAT makes this story a lot easier to understand!

Lol sorry if i didn't make that clear.

Well, part of it was because I didn't catch the 16 ABY at the very beginning, though if you put in his last name somewhere in the beginning, it would help too for other readers.

General Grievous wrote:Well, part of it was because I didn't catch the 16 ABY at the very beginning, though if you put in his last name somewhere in the beginning, it would help too for other readers.

Well it is called Jango Nova- The Hunt Begins

Oh, I thought the Jango Nova was there because you're the author and all. Tehe, the education system here's failing me.

General Grievous wrote:Oh, I thought the Jango Nova was there because you're the author and all. Tehe, the education system here's failing me.

Lol no problem vod. Working on Chapter 4 and should have it up soon. Going to be more character building and less action for a couple of chapters.

Ah that's ok, it was still a good chapter. I mean, it would be pointless if it were NOTHING but action. It needs a little storyline built in to it here and there, like you're obviously doing.

Hmmm, I'm beginning to wonder who I like more-Goran or Jango........

General Grievous wrote:Hmmm, I'm beginning to wonder who I like more-Goran or Jango........

As they say-Short and Sweet, Jango!

Thanks =) It was sorta fun writing Alia character. Im going to enjoy building the relation between her and Goran.

Yes, I can imagine. New characters are always fun to build a story around!