Review Thread

Wow.

DarthCadues781 wrote:WOW, that was amazing, you are a great writer.

Thanks! Actually, I really am hoping to become a writer when i grow up, and I'm always hoping that if i do, i get to write SW novels.

I concur, WOW!!! I'd read your SW novels if you wrote them someday!

BarrisOffee1297 wrote:I concur, WOW!!! I'd read your SW novels if you wrote them someday!

Thanks! For the record, the next chapter will take a while to put up completely since its pretty long and basically one big space battle.

I can't wait to see what happens!

me either!!!

Hey guys, I have a question to ask. I'm thinking about writing another story on here about Operation: Knightfall, but I'm worried that it might be hard to write both this one and it at the same time. I want your opinions about what to do. Should I write the new one, but post on this one the most? Or should I post on this one one day, the other the next? Please give me your opinion.

Well, I have the new as about as planned as this one. I might be able to handle writing both, but I would probably not post as much on the new one if I wasn't writing this one. I'll probably start up the new story, and if I can't handle it then i'll erase the thread and write it again when this story's written.

Ok everybody, I just created the thread for my new story.

I'll check it out.

Ok, I know that it's been a while since I posted anything on this story, but I just updated chapter 2 for you with a couple of extra paragraphs at the end to make up for the lost time. Enjoy!!!

Ok, I posted the first part of chapter three for ya! This part introduces Pilot Jasten, Ullen, and Homer. Jasten is a very lage part of my story, and although Ullen is not in it as much, he is too. Homer is just a secondary character, and doesn't play as much a role as the first two do.

No, I made him and the other two pilots up myself.

Okay, I just posted another part of Chapter 3. This part introduces Captain Malluck, who will appear several times in the first part of the story.

Ok, I just posted another part of Chapter 3! Sorry I didn't post sooner but I've been sooooo busy lately. Enjoy!

Thanks! This was the biggest action scene I've had to write so far, so I'd really like some reviews on this part!

Yeah, I've been looking foward to writing this part. But trust me, this is just one battle scene out of MANY in my story. Ha, I can't wait til chapters 4 and 5. I have something special in mind for those......

Ok, I have now finished chapter three. It kinda ends with a surprise, so please read and review!