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26Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:33 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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You have written a story? Please post it! I'd read it. Very Happy

27Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:37 am

Guest


Guest

Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_twisted Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_twisted Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_twisted Okay, but I think it sucks, I have been revising it for months, and i still think it needs alot of work,

How much do I post?

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28Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:41 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

Just open a new topic and post all of it or your first chapter.

29Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:42 am

Guest


Guest

Okay.

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30Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:32 am

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

Review Thread - Page 2 250px-Barris_deathThis is a picture of her death on Felucia. The video is in the movie and it's copyrighted so I can't post it. If it is a video but I actually think it was this picture not a video. Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_biggrin

http://www.opineofmine.blogspot.com

31Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:24 am

Guest


Guest

oh, well Leia you could always go with my theory if you want Barris alive.

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32Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:45 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

I don't think I will. I've already got a plan for my first chapter, but it'll take me a while to post it because I haven't felt like writing it yet. cherry

33Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:39 am

EmileSalSolo

EmileSalSolo

kewl.

34Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:58 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

kewl.

Thanks! cherry

35Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:46 am

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

Can't wait to read the first chapter!! Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_biggrin

http://www.opineofmine.blogspot.com

36Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:26 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Umm I actually haven't started it yet. Embarassed I know what I'm going to do, but I haven't felt like writing it yet. I think I'll finish the first chapter today and post it tomarow after church or the next day.

37Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:13 am

Guest


Guest

wath or read something about leia, you will be suprised how quickly you will want to write.

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38Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:46 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Okay, good advice. cherry

39Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:49 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

I have almost finished the first chapter. It shows how life has been for Leia and Ahsoka on Shili. It also mentions a character I made up. A togruta girl who will be in the story. Chapter two will start their adventure. I already have an idea. cherry

40Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:49 am

Guest


Guest

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41Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:53 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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Yeah, I guess so. I grabbed my Episode Four Infinities comic book, read a little, then started writing! Very Happy

42Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:55 am

Guest


Guest

When I couldn't think of anything more to write I watched a clone wars video with Padme and a bitter Anakin (Senate spy) and it all came to me.

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43Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:52 pm

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

Cool. Review Thread - Page 2 Icon_biggrin

http://www.opineofmine.blogspot.com

44Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:58 pm

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

The first chapter has been delayed due to my lack of enthusiasm. Wink

45Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:15 am

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

That happens to me. But if you just sit down and start to write sometimes the story becomes really fun and it kind of just "flows" onto the paper. Very Happy

http://www.opineofmine.blogspot.com

46Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:18 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
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I finished it, but it just needs some touch ups. I guess I better go finish it up. It's a short chapter that just gets you familar with how life is like for Ahsoka and Leia.

47Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:18 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

Yay! Read and review my first chapter! cherry

48Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:21 am

BarrissOffee1297

BarrissOffee1297

AWESOME chapter!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

http://www.opineofmine.blogspot.com

49Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:22 am

Leia Organa

Leia Organa
Admin

Thank you! Razz

50Review Thread - Page 2 Empty Re: Review Thread Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:16 am

Guest


Guest

That was great, I liked the Hero with no fear part, it sounded likke pure star wars.

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