Review Thread

I loved ur story!Good job!

Urm, how do I put this, we've tried to have reviews and stories be separta before naka, but it's never really worked out. You see, we can't move old reviews to these threads, and it wasn't fair for others who wanted review threads but couldn't have them without erasing their old reviews, which no one wanted. So, I'm going to have to ask if it'll be alright for me to combine this thread with your story's. Can I go ahead?

OOO! what a dillemia! I guess whey not , if they can't do it whey should I

Ok, I'll combine it right now....

Ok, I've combined it. Also, great story! Nicely described, and had a cool plot. I liked being able to read a new fan-fiction. it seems that leia, Belle, and I are the only ones who even bother to keep updating and writing our stories.

Well! i'm glad you all liked it. Thanks for the comments

Ha, no problem! Like I said, it's nice to have another fan-fic to review besides Leia's, Belle's and mine.

Pretty good! When will more be up?

I thought that was the end actually! Tehe. Maybe it's just me, but I could have sworn that was the ending right there.

i acually wanted to end the story right there. But i might expand it u never know Liea

Well, the ending paragraph with Dooku DOES leave room for expansion of the story......

I like to do that Grievous

Yeah, expanding stories are great to do. In fact, my story Assault of the Aggressor originally only had about 2-3 parts, but now it has five. Ha, I haven't even finished the first one....

Be on the look out for "Betrayal and Innocence"

Wow, return to innocence was very discriptive! I liked it!

Very good Naka!!!!!!! I'll look forward to more!!!

In your opinion Liea, is more action needed in the story. Yoda seems to think so

Good point Liea, it does get better though just watch

Ok, I finally got the chance to read more of your story, and may I say that it has gotten VERY great. Perhaps some action is needed to keep it going, but so far it's been kinda better off without action. Your story is a lot like mine-it builds up to action (with the spy probe and all), not immediately starting off with the most intense you've got. So please keep up the great work!

Im glad u all like it. and i will continue to post more for "Return to Innocence" watch the Update section

loved innocence!

Wow, Return to Innocense has begun to take a really interesting turn, storyline-wise. The spy keeps on following them, and now there's a bunch of dead people......interesting........