Review Thread

Um, im not entirlly sure were to take "Sons of Tattoonie". All i really have is that scene right there.

Ha, well, I say that you have Anakin on a mission on Tatooine (explaining how he saved Biggs) and somehow he gets hurt. Then, Biggs helps him, and Anakin saves the day. (again. )

Might work. Ill give it some thought Grievous. And thanks for repairing my front problem

Let me finish up "Return to Innocence" and then ill start working on "Sons of Tattooine"

Naka Dormin77 wrote:Might work. Ill give it some thought Grievous. And thanks for repairing my front problem

Ha, no problem! Also, I agree, it's best to just focus on one story at a time. I once tried to write two at once, and I wound up just writing so much of "Assault of the Aggressor" that I could only get a few paragraphs out of the other story. So one at a time is definitely the best thing to do.

U could also do the scene in "Sons of Tattooine" with a loner cowboy and an innocent farmboy attacked by hostile indians.

Ha, that's a neat analogy! Oooo! Why don't you rename it "The Tatooine Warrior", replace Anakin with some dude with a bunch of weapons and a western hat! That'd be awesome!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, perhaps I got too excited, it's your story after all.

Right. U do that Grievous. Its your idea anyway

Hmm, I might. But first I have to finish Assault of the Aggressor. Like I said, I once tried to write two at once, but it went straight to the Kessel Spice Mines.

Thats using Sw slang to say it went down hill. Or did it really go straight to the Kessel Mines?

It's my SW slang for it going down the hill.

Ok

Thanks Yoda

I might. The story "Return to Innocence" is ment to show u just how deep Ahsoka's relationship with Plo Koon is. It also shows u what happened proir to her being discover by Plo .

Yah. I've been having some trouble with the story lately

donno. Benn having some trouble with the front size, it keeps jumping around from big to really small