whatcha think of ch2?
Review Thread
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Winter Retrac Celchu27
GeneralGrievous505
BarrissOffee1297
Leia Organa
GabbyTheJediAvenger
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Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:15 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
thanks!I wish more people would read it tho
4 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:28 am
Leia Organa
Admin
Yeah, I wish more would read mine too. I always make a point to review other people's stories.
5 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:30 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
will u pm ppl an tell them bout my storys?they seem to listen to u better
6 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:32 am
Leia Organa
Admin
Oh! They listen to you too! You just need to promote your story more. On the threads update and main chat I post a post when I have an update. I even add this: *new chapter* on my title when I have a new chapter.
7 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:34 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
ok could you change the title to that?
*NEW CHAPTER OF AN UNKNOWN HERO*
Thx!
*NEW CHAPTER OF AN UNKNOWN HERO*
Thx!
10 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:39 am
GeneralGrievous505
Admin
I like it so far Belle! I thought it was a neat plot to make the lead terroist her sister. Very innovative!
12 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:43 am
GeneralGrievous505
Admin
Yeah, sorry I couldn't read it sooner, but my internet keeps crashing like the Invisible Hand!
14 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:53 am
Winter Retrac Celchu27
I thought it was great Belle! update soon! Please! 
15 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:54 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
thanks!!I like the whole evil sister thing
16 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:57 am
Winter Retrac Celchu27
Me too. Belle is so cool! And her sister too!
20 Re: Review Thread Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:42 pm
GabbyTheJediAvenger
Question:
How would you descrbe Belle?
How would you descrbe Belle?
21 Re: Review Thread Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:30 am
Leia Organa
Admin
Oh, cool! This one's the best so far! Hmmm I would descibe Belle as a little confused emotionally because of what happened to her mother, sister, and now Padme being kidnapped. I'd say she's starting to feel a bit alone and like it's all up to her. She seems strong-willed though.
22 Re: Review Thread Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:33 am
GeneralGrievous505
Admin
Cool! Bounty hunters! If you don't mind, I may use your story to get some more insight on bounty hunters whenever Cad Bane is introduced in my story, Assault of the Aggressor. I need to know more of a bounty hunters personality for it to be the best it can be.
23 Re: Review Thread Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:18 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
oh sure and thanks!
I would discribe belle as strong willed determined but her past always gets to her,causing some problems.She has a bad habbit of forming attachments.She loves her friends and will do anything for them.Fighting she is very simulr to starkiller(but shes good so no force lighnin r nothin like that)
I would discribe belle as strong willed determined but her past always gets to her,causing some problems.She has a bad habbit of forming attachments.She loves her friends and will do anything for them.Fighting she is very simulr to starkiller(but shes good so no force lighnin r nothin like that)
24 Re: Review Thread Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:44 am
GabbyTheJediAvenger
Shes also strong in mind body AND the force
25 Re: Review Thread Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:46 am
Guest
Guest
wow, that was better than I thought, it was great.
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