Review Thread

Thanks!Which did u like better ch2 or ch3?I like both the same

And if you think this is good YOU OUTTA READ THE BATTLE SCENES IN CH4 AND THE BIGGEST MOST INTENSE DUEL WHICH WILL GIVE A WHOLE NEW MEANING TO SIBLING RIVALRY!!!!!CANT WAIT TO POST IT!!!!!!!!

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I did too.CH4 AND CH5 WILL BLOW YOUR MINDS!!!!!!!!

sweet.

Those two cahpters are mainly action.It really tells how good of a jedi and how good of a fighter belle is

I love your new chapter Belle. I cant wait for chapter four and five!

thanks!

Posting ch4 tommorro!

NOw i don't know that much about star wars, beside the 6 movies, but i actually got the whole thing, compared to my sisters thing

Thanks.I hexitated to post ch2 ch3 ch4 ch5 ch6 ch7 and ch8 after ur sisters story but im glad i did. They turned out better than i thought

AGREED

thanks!

Chapter five tomorro!

Seems as tho nobody else wants to read this

Who do you think will win?Graciana or Belle?Post what you think along with your comment!

Thanks!!!!!!

Question:
An ultamite showdown.Blood versus blood.Sister versus sister.Darkness versus light.Who do you think will win?Belle or Graciana?

Another Question:
What was ur fave part in the chapter?Is belle a good Jedi?Is belle a good fighter?What are somethings you like about her?Which bounty hunter of the fatal five would you like to be?

Dum Dah Dah Dum!!!!!!Chapter 5 today!!!!!!And thank you to all my fans!!!!It really helps this writers confidence in her book when you comment!!!!!!

OK chapter five may not get posted today but if it dont it will b 2morro!!!!

Cool action Belle! Belle was described quite well. However, to help you out, I think you should have described the Fatal Five a bit more. If I hadn't seen the Dramatis Personae beforehand, I would have been completely lost. I'm not wanting to be critical or anything, because this is actually a really good story, but I'm just wanting to help you out as a fellow writer of SW novels.

I kno.I did in the orginal chapter4 but i have to shorten them on this so i can post them.But thanks!