Review Thread

HINT HINT EVERYONE someone will die in the hext chapter

Wow, sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been missing out! I like how this story's been going so far. And I really liked this line :"I'd rather have Ventress lead us than Gwen" HA!

Wow that was great, feel sorry for that character >wink< though, however sometimes i suppose it is necessary to take out a character, like i remember one of my favorite novels, Ice Station, and when my favorite character met his horrible jaw dropping fate at the hands of a tyranical British SAS commander (thank god im aussie he he) all i wanted was for the main character to take revenge, it was good how you built up the characters in this way so that way you do feel a sense of loss and a need for revenge, (used the Ice Station example becuase i didn't want to give away spoilers to those who haven't read it) I also liked how you connected this with the latest ep of the CW and the larger saga as well i can already tell ahsoka is going to learn some very valuable lessons throughout this story i honestly cant wait for the next chapter wonderful writing keep it up

OMG I LOVED ITTT!!!!Been really busy an i read all ur chapters an I LOVEEE ITTT!!!!!!!Will u read mine?

sure thing

Gotta feeling u'll like belle:)

loved it!

I love chapter 23 Ahsokasister! Your a good writer!

thank you so much

Why do I get the feeling Gwen will commit suicide because she killed Rasi?......Anyways, good chapter!

love this new chapter, well done, i love it how you always end with a cliffhanger, the next chapter should be intresting, once again great work

ya i'm do glad you guys like it

wow that was great, love the line "sounds like a fortune cookie" ha good work the fight sequence was done well and i look foward to the next chapter (as always)

Well, once again a great chapter!

Well, at least Gwen's less annoying now.

wonderful chapter, once again well written and of course i look foward to the next one, great work ahsokasister keep it up

Yay thanx

OK guys there is another story i really want to try after Time Cannot Erase and before Secrets of a Broken Heart. Here is the sypnosis (I know it sound childish but it will be much better than it souns and it will be more about that charaters not the swimming):
Anakin has been very busy on "meditative retreats" and solo missions. Ahsoka slowly begins to run out of things to do and stummbles across a competitive swim team who is more than happy to have her. But when the republic decides to remove the pool for more "war-like" purposes, Ahsoka tries to sway the senates decision. Meanwhile Palpatine tries to get Anakin to work in his favor. Will Anakin stay loyal to his padawan or will his attachment drive him to cause her more pain than intended?

exactly but i changed my mind about the whole pool idea. it will actually be a recording studio. something ahsoka does partially becuse of Rasi