Review Thread

Ok i wanted to apologize for not updating sooner but the next update should be today and in the next story called Hard Ball it will not be a recording studio or a pool it will be a star wars soccer field (inside artificial grass ect ect)
PS there r only 3 more chapters after the one ill post today so ALMOST DONE

Wow, I liked this chapter a lot, probably cause of the action. *smiles sheepishly* LOL, though seriously, good chapter.

hey, ahsoka, do you know when your next update will be, im looking foward to it = D

WOW!You seem very creative Ahsokasister.

aw thanx for sticking with my story guys two chaptera are now up

Awwwwwww. Sad, but very well written.

ah yet another touching couple of chapters. once again great work as always. I honestly hope that when you finish you will go on and do the others becuase I have really enjoyed this story cant wait for the final chapters.

so, this book would be fairly big. Just curious about how and when you will wrap this up and start your second book in the series?

after four..ish more chapters i will start the next one under that tittle (Secrets of A Broken Heart)

alright. well I hope you don't do a cliff hanger at the end of this one. I would hate to have to wait

dont worry i wont

I love your new chapters Ahsokasister!

Hmm, you said that there was more to go, but I personally thought that this chapter would be a great ending for this story.

i agree but there is a twist coming up... du..du...DUUUUU

Great chapter, can't believe Ahsokatook the crown. I thought that in the end, she might shy away but you did justice to her character to make her stick there and take the crown like a jedi.

If any of that made sense, well, great chapter anyway.

Ah, I figured that she'd return to the Jedi at the end.

Great chapter soka, and the crown looked great. I can't wait for you to tart your next book.

ha ha, wow that was a awsome fan fic, if thats the ending than that was great, honestly loved the whole thing, of course I can not wait until secrets of a broken heart (Although I suppose you will be taking a break now lol) and I'm sure it will be the same level of great writing, thanks for a great story and I hope for more.

no no 2 chapters left and no break

oh thats good lol, Im really looking foward to it ha ha, and the fact that there will be no break just sweetens the deal, however everything i said before still stands, good story.

Wow, great ending, especially with it's twist of who ruled the kingdom. Well done.

I loved the end where the grandmothers voice is heard saying your mother and I are so proud, it makes me think she has matured in the force to start actually hearing the voices of loved one long gone!